Wow. What talent. Obviously, she is writing from someone else's point of view, as well. She seems too fond of water to repeat that the ocean is yucky.
The ocean is a swish is a great piece of imagery. I'd be happy to see that from one of my 2nd graders.
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Wow. What talent. Obviously, she is writing from someone else's point of view, as well. She seems too fond of water to repeat that the ocean is yucky.
The ocean is a swish is a great piece of imagery. I'd be happy to see that from one of my 2nd graders.
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